Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?

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Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?

Everyone likes a successful person. However, the success of an individual depends on many factors such as hard work, perseverance and determination and not on region alone. This essay will explain reasons and factors that define a successful person.

To begin with, it is the urge in humans to perform best of their abilities to achieve their life goals. These qualities are perseverance, determination, motivation, discipline, ambitions and most importantly hard work. Moreover, support from friends and family play an important role too in your journey to success. Although a good and cohesive environment is beneficial, a person who is disciplined will gets his or her goal no matter where they are.

Secondly, to accomplish anything in life requires a career plan and discipline. These are corner stones of having a successful career. For example, Sachin Tendulkar used to practice in net sessions for more than 5 hours a day. Michael Jordon used to put 1000 baskets per day. These people have burnt the midnight oil to achieve desired positions. Although from different regions but they are successful today.

To sum up, it does not matter where are you from, what matters is the discipline and determination in life to become successful. In my opinion, for a victorious person a positive outlook, ambitions and right attitude will make him or her achieve goals, the place will have a lesser effect on its achievements.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15450643777 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91033963845 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660944206009 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1544230726 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0666666667 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184067892801 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594098128042 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658666665244 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104552248238 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573782420231 0.0609392437508 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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