In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

It is true that mortality rate is increasing in developed nations. However, there can be some negative outcomes of this trend, which can be judiciously controlled in the society.

Without any doubt, the growth in life expectancy leads to several problems in the country. Firstly, the aging population may not remain employed in a laborious industry such as auto, metals, and mining where people with better physique are always in demand. Therefore, creating dearth of talented individuals and impact businesses, if seniors continue to be employed in the sector. In addition, the tax burden on the government will increase to support senior citizens through pensions and other benefits which may not be an ideal use of taxpayer’s money. Finally, with everyone having busy schedule in the present scenario, additional time, effort and cost is invested for their healthy lifestyle.

There are several measures that can be taken by the government and society to solve the problems mentioned above. Firstly, extending retirement age in various sectors such as education and training will not only keep seniors employed but also preparing youngsters for the modern world. Additionally, the private sector may step forward to create employment opportunities for senior citizens. For example, in back-office or a desk job enabling people in this age to make living for themselves. Finally, society should contribute by opening healthcare and social groups for giving old people an active lifestyle.

In conclusion, various measures mentioned above can be taken to mitigate the impact aging population in the country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48207171315 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83762125929 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6943613972 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264554500282 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862097210144 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512624553341 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153514764789 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338681501862 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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