Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.

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Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.

Whether one's success is dependent on his or her native regions is a debatable topic. This essay will explain complete disagreement with this statement and will offers reasons for this viewpoint.

Firstly, a variety of reasons can be attributed that why I am not in support of the statement. For example, discipline, hardwork, motivation and determination are some of the virtues that enable people to achieve their career goals. Moreover, support from friends and family play an important role too in their journey of success. Although there is no doubt that a good and cohesive enviornment is beneficial but it is not the single deciding factor in the journery of success.

Secondly, one factor which should be remembered is hardwork not place or region. Because if region is attributed as main factor of success then all successful people will be from the same place in the world. However, many leaders are not only from different parts of the world but also have burnt the midnight oil for reaching their desired positions. To illustrate, Bill Gates, Larry Page, Nelson Mandela, Jack Ma are some of the eminent personalities and perfect examples of successful leaders in their respective fields. Therefore, success is the blend of many qualities that makes a perfect recepie of achieving the summit in career.

To conclude, native region may give better environment but should not be regarded as a reason of success. Because a leader is made with his or her determination, handwork and motivation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Whether ones success is dependent on his or her nati...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'offer'
Suggestion: offer
...sagreement with this statement and will offers reasons for this viewpoint. Firstly,...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...dwork, motivation and determination are some of the virtues that enable people to achieve t...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...Larry Page, Nelson Mandela, Jack Ma are some of the eminent personalities and perfect examp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in fact, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11336032389 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79890345992 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4482838083 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.1538461538 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181781255271 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641001993775 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628887129444 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105437500027 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473980051379 0.0609392437508 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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