The environment we live in is in danger due to various global problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures?The environment we live in is in danger due to various global problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures?
No surprise that our planet is under threat. Increasing number of natural calamities such as tsunami, earthquakes, and floods have given us numerous of warning signals. Therefore the governments, corporates, and individuals must work in coalition to resolve these problems and foster an organic lifestyle.
To begin with, there is no doubt that our cities are increasingly becoming polluted because of a rapid increase in traffic, industrial activities, deforestation, and population. Urbanization is evaporating green cover from the planet. And, all these reasons have attributed to an effect called global warming. Therefore, it is the high time that people work in tandem to solve these problems.
The government has all the power to implement appropriate measures to mitigate or resolve these problems. For instance, the regime must implement policies to control pollution and improve green cover on the planet. Additionally, new norms can be established for the industries to reduce emission. However, these efforts coupled with general public contribution will double the effect of policies. People must abide the policies to safeguard our enviornment. For instance, car pooling is another method to reduce traffic on roads.
To sum up, it will take a joint effort of everyone to improve the overall quality of our environment and bring it back to its glory. In my opinion, the government, the industries, and people should and must work together, if we want to save our planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...e given us numerous of warning signals. Therefore the governments, corporates, and indivi...
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX
Message: Use simply 'public'.
...on. However, these efforts coupled with general public contribution will double the effect of ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41201716738 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97176753967 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639484978541 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6702562244 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0666666667 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0584507311237 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0197050068328 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253540623454 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0354885066006 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117678614355 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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