Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that they will be traveling near to your home town on business in a few months' time.
Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you. In your letter
say how pleased you are to hear from them
invite them to stay with you
tell them about your ideas of how you could spend the time together
Dear Jay,
I am writing today to extent you my warm welcome to stay at my house during your business trip to my city. I was so happy to meet you at my last vacation to Manali, and somehow we become good friends during our stay at Shiva Camp in Manali Valley.
After hearing the news from your last mail, you'll be coming to my hometown for a business tour. I felt happy because we will once again get chance to meet each other from our busy work live.
As you know, Its been almost a year, and we haven't seen each other. Thus, I want you to come and stay at my house while you'll be engage with your company business. I'll promise not to disturb you during your working hours on your business tour, but afterwards, I'll planning you to take out to the nearest bar for couple of drinks and some good talk about our lives and well being.
Moreover, I have prepared some plans for the weekend to enjoy and spend some time together such as to go and see a movie, dine-out in your favorite restaurant, visit some of the exquisite destinations nearby city. It will be planned according to your comfort and desires which you want to do in your free time of this trip.
I hope you'll accept my invitation to come to my home during your business trip which is in next few months.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Your friend,
Shwatank
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...r hearing the news from your last mail, youll be coming to my hometown for a business...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ou know, Its been almost a year, and we havent seen each other. Thus, I want you to co...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... you to come and stay at my house while youll be engage with your company business. I...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...-out in your favorite restaurant, visit some of the exquisite destinations nearby city. It ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...your free time of this trip. I hope youll accept my invitation to come to my home...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38645418327 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09929539562 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5646139875 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319760619686 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136957641882 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066556779561 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154173518023 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524839369771 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...r hearing the news from your last mail, youll be coming to my hometown for a business...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ou know, Its been almost a year, and we havent seen each other. Thus, I want you to co...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... you to come and stay at my house while youll be engage with your company business. I...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...-out in your favorite restaurant, visit some of the exquisite destinations nearby city. It ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...your free time of this trip. I hope youll accept my invitation to come to my home...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38645418327 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09929539562 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5646139875 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319760619686 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136957641882 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066556779561 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154173518023 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524839369771 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.