You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your city that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the incorrect news article which was posted in your yesterday's international travel magazine. And, I hope you will present the real facts by sharing the right information with your readers.
Since my city is the capital of India, it is one of the popular destinations for our citizens, and especially for foreign travelers in my country. My city has an unforgettable history of becoming a capital after the revolution on the 15th of August 1947. However, recently you have posted in your article that Delhi has become a safe place in this ongoing pandemic of coronavirus. But, these are not the real facts because we have a high count number of cases in Delhi. People are suffering from this pandemic wave of Covid-19. As a result, we have banned international and national flights from our place. And, no outsider from the other countries and other states in India is allowed to enter the city.
This information is crucial for your readers because you might know, they could have been planning a vacation to spend the time in India. Besides, most of the international flights arrive at the capital city of India. Therefore, I urge you to please share the appropriate information with your followers of the travel magazine.
Also, I suggest you please telecast the news on your channel, so, in this case, everyone should immediately get to know the correct information and on-ground facts of the ongoing pandemic situation of coronavirus in Delhi.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response to this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, look, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00364963504 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75039411781 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0406916049 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272748084545 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845230192921 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604188340174 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147734884781 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07654720098 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.