Letter writing.
Forgot my bag at the airport. Write a letter to get it back
You should start with Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, I have forgotten to collect my bag while returning from the airport. I was travelling with North Asian airlines which landed at 9:30 pm to the airport. My seat number is AJ712. It's very unfortunate that I remembered about the bag after reaching the hotel. I believe that you will give your personal attention to this matter.
The bag is a large travelling suitcase type and is made of hard plastic. And it's red in colour so I guess it wouldn't be hard to notice. The bag also has my name tag on it which says, Dr Robert Dgenero.
I would be in a great debt of yours if you just collect this bag and then return call me on my private number 9876458724. As you can imagine, this bag has some very important documentation of mine besides, I will send someone from the hotel to the airport as soon as possible till you collect the bag for me.
Yours Faithfully,
Dr Robert Dgenero
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| 2020-07-23 | nands71191 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: red
...pe and is made of hard plastic. And its red in colour so I guess it wouldnt be hard to notice...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ic. And its red in colour so I guess it wouldnt be hard to notice. The bag also has my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, then, while, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4011299435 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42200958344 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2726339368 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8181818182 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265393687914 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084298519102 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100553228147 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14877516883 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814202481669 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.