Look at the two maps of Sunnyhi/ls University campus in 1995 and today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
The map below indicates how the Sunnyhills university campus change from 1995 to today.
Overall, a comparison of the two maps show that the area underwent significant development over period show, especially with the increase in facilities.
Look at the first map in more detail, it can be seen that the Founder building is in the middle of the campus university and surrounded by student’s union, Scott library, cafe and Watson building. Watson building was between the main reception and hall of residence, which was surrounded by a lot of tree. There was a car park 1 in the top left hand corner opposite to the bus stop. There was a big area include football pitch, gym and tennis courts, which opposite to the car park 2 and café.
The second map shows that the main reception is in the top left hand corner under two hall of residence and opposite the car park. Arts building and laboratory were built under the Watson and founder’s building respectively. The big area was removed by recreation area, a lot of tree and POND. Scott library is removed to between the founder’s building and a new table tennis. Above the Scott library is the student’s union which is between the squash, courts/ gym and a bus stop.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 495, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'café' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cafés'.
Suggestion: cafés
...s, which opposite to the car park 2 and café. The second map shows that the m...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... opposite to the car park 2 and café. The second map shows that the main recep...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 88, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hall' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'halls'.
Suggestion: halls
...s in the top left hand corner under two hall of residence and opposite the car park....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89252336449 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78403120794 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509345794393 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3727261366 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122121144409 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485911398611 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685590027493 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984803827003 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679823291259 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.