Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree?

Social networking sites is a network of people worldwide. It formed to connect the unconnected people. It originated to brought out the ideas of liberty, integrity and harmony at global level. On basis of nature of work, social networking sites divided into two parts i.e., by professionals and second by unprofessionals.
Execution by professionals is to mainly for awareness and to express officials views or information. It maybe also for business purpose. Whereas by unprofessionals is for collecting those awareness news or connection with family,friends etc.
Now society is made up of individuals and so individuals with awareness, thinking, surrounding that conceived. Even when people didn't connected through social media, world war had been seen. This shows greed and hegemony of one nation to other exists even when social networking sites weren't.
Social networking sites is became a way of living in most people lives. Billions of news,post and article one came in contact of oneself, it's depend on person to person assumption and extent of making impact in positive or negative way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this awareness' or 'those awarenesses'?
Suggestion: this awareness; those awarenesses
...as by unprofessionals is for collecting those awareness news or connection with family,friends ...
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Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , friends
...awareness news or connection with family,friends etc. Now society is made up of indivi...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s or connection with family,friends etc. Now society is made up of individuals an...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...unding that conceived. Even when people didnt connected through social media, world w...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...xists even when social networking sites werent. Social networking sites is became a ...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...es werent. Social networking sites is became a way of living in most people lives. B...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , post
...g in most people lives. Billions of news,post and article one came in contact of ones...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, second, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35838150289 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08068083494 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7007044437 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22947593959 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770768388657 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814023733691 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122023032192 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706230527663 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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