The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

Essay topics:

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

The maps illustrate how Castellon's Spanish city has changed over the last 21 years
Overall, the city witnessed radical changes with the most changes noticeable being the developments of public services and the construction of more environmentally transportation.
In 2000, the road which next to the city centre severed car and other vehicles, but now it only allows bike with a bike rental scheme and just for pedestrians only. Furthermore, there are a cinema, bars and clubs on the right-hand side of the road, where it used to be an empty lot. There was a university located in the north with some trees next to it, but recently, the trees were cleared to make way for a new shopping centre and the university is currently connected with the city centre by a tramline. A train station and an old market were destroyed and replaced by a police station and a new shop, respectively.
From the northwest to the east of the city, there was an appearance of some noticeable addition, for example, a new hall of residence, a new covered market and the airport which is still under construction. Then, the train station of 2000 has now been moved to the east of the old ones where is halfway between the university and the city centre.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, still, then, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73148148148 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79370434202 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4293353651 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 76.5299724578 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116706828704 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496132367269 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600101096765 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096126711683 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702424423365 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 8.37731958763 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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