A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum.
Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful.
Give details of when you would be available for work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this request letter to inform you that interested to take up the voluntary activities at the Dakshinchitra museum and it's one of my hobbies. It is also close to my house.
Normally I go to the museum most of the weekends will spend precious time over there because the museum is close to nature. I was bowled over by seeing the architecture of the museum which was built quite 30 years ago. I have informed the receptionist that if any voluntary services are needed from residents, it's a pleasure to serve for the development of the museum.
The skills and qualities which I am having helping the visitors indeed anything required, will look after the place is clean and arrange things in a good manner. I will be available on all the weekends and to serve for the museum development. With this request letter, I have enclosed my profile for your kind consideration.
I look forward to your reply as soon as possible. Thanks in advance and much appreciated.
Yours Sincerely,
Dinesh Kumar S.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ary services are needed from residents, its a pleasure to serve for the development...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75690607735 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73299231073 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6654886045 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230441396424 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760376635236 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052667714793 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122043568667 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380760972881 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.