Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the opening of a new program on your news channel name "Hidden mysterious places in India". Since I am a traveler, I am fond of exploring the various places in my country, especially the ones which are unknown to the world.
Recently, I have visited this place called " The Ghost valley" in Chamba which is one of the unexplored places in the Himalayas. There is a small town of twenty families living near this valley. While trekking on the mountains near the ghost valley, you will able to see the Kailash mountain with the help of a telescope. Plus, it has breathtaking views along with pleasant weather conditions in all seasons.
The reason for advising you to visit this valley because to see the traditional culture of Chamba which is still unknown to many people who are living in the cities. Another reason to visit that they celebrate every Hindu festival for five days. Since the festival of colors "Holi" is coming in next week, it would be a great chance to see the culture and celebration of Holi in this place.
Most of these undiscovered places in the Himalayas have been discovered and found useful for mankind such as herbal plants which were mentioned in the Hindu book Geeta. Still, researchers are discovering the hidden stores in these mountains. Thus, it would be a great opportunity for the channel as well the for the citizens of our nations to learn about such places.
I am hoping that you would visit the ghost valley in Chamba and other unknown places in the Himalayas.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76618705036 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49930635789 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 278.0 16.3608247423 1699% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1325.0 76.5299724578 1731% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 278.0 16.8248392259 1652% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.0 4.34317383033 852% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171785751246 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171785751246 0.0766984524023 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971445490311 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392550166957 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 140.0 8.37731958763 1671% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -202.23 70.7449484536 -286% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 110.5 7.45979381443 1481% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.87 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.72 7.59969072165 273% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 113.2 8.54432989691 1325% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 8.15463917526 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.