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Department of customer service,
To whom it may concerns,
I am writing this letter to report the dramatic technical Problem, which occurred during the listening test on Saturday, last week.
On Saturday 23th Feb, I sat on Academic Module which conducted by IELTS TEHRAN venue in Shiraz, Iran.
During the listening, test one of invigilators suddenly stopped the exam procedure and announce that the listening test had already finished before section 4 started! That happening had created severe anxiety for me and I was staggered and had not understood what the problem was. After that, the normal sequence of exam changed and they announced to “start writing section” before reading. Again, another shock shrove me and made the situation worst.
Unfortunately, that is not the end of the story! After writing and reading, they announce ‘let’s start listening section 4 again and just answer 4 questions”.
So, I think this problem will have affected my scores and despite the many months of work and a lot of workouts, this problem wiped out all my efforts and, not only my listening section but also my entire exam seriously deteriorated by the unknown problem.
I am exceedingly displeased with the quality of the test. I hope this problem will be resolved promptly. I expect to resit on a replacement exam in all sections for free as soon as possible, or have a fair and mutually agreed solution or please refund the exam cost.
I look forward to hearing back from you immediately.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...this problem will be resolved promptly. I expect to resit on a replacement exam i...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ution or please refund the exam cost. I look forward to hearing back from you i...
^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from you immediately. Yours faithfully,
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13492063492 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89608601131 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6406208969 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.636363636 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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