An old friend is coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain that you are unable to come
Find out how long your friend is staying here
Arrange a suitable time to meet
Dear Bill,
Hope you're keeping well and the kids are fine. Thanks for asking me to come to the cinema, but I'm going to have to pass I'm afraid - I have already arranged to catch up with a few people from the place I used to work. My old boss is retiring, so it'd be good to catch up with him before he leaves.
How long will you have? We can arrange another night or why don't you come along to the part I'm going to? I'm sure you'll have a good time, and I think you have already met a few of the people at that Christmas party a few years ago. It probably won't go on too late, so we could perhaps go somewhere afterwards?
If you're keen, I can pick you up at the station and you can spend the night with us at our place - it'll be like old times!
All the best,
Gary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 628.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.9746835443 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.85232117895 2.54303337028 73% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651898734177 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7322369888 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188952851148 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880762696884 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496666963313 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131308522002 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269551409556 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 70.7449484536 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.75 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.68 7.59969072165 75% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 41.2886597938 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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