An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport,
but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain the situation
Offer to make alternate arrangements
Dear Revathy,
How are you? hope everything is fine with you. I am still in excitement and anxiety that we are going to meet after a very long time. I hope there are no changes to your travel plan. Confirm your itenary at least two days before your date of travel.
As planned earlier i could not come to pick you up from the airport. there are few client meetings that I need to tend to at office next week. As these clients are important delegates my manager has asked me to facilitate their visit and meetings personally. I wish I could be there when you land.
Nevertheless, I have arranged your pick up as per the itenary you sent before. A good friend of mine, Renuka and her husband will be picking you up from the airport Exit gate after you land. She will be carrying your name board of course, to welcome you. I will send her mobile phone number by today, incase if you couldn’t locate her. Well, you always have my number also.
hope you don’t have any issues with that. Please do not hesitate either one of us any time.
Let me know if you need anything before. Can’t wait to meet you.
Bye until then,
With Luv always,
Joyce
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Revathy, How are you? hope everything is fine wit...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Dear Revathy, How are you? hope everything is fine with you. I am still...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...wo days before your date of travel. As planned earlier i could not come to pic...
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Line 6, column 21, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...date of travel. As planned earlier i could not come to pick you up from the ...
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Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...t come to pick you up from the airport. there are few client meetings that I need to ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 375, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...te her. Well, you always have my number also. hope you don't have any issues...
^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...ell, you always have my number also. hope you don't have any issues with tha...
^^^^
Line 16, column 10, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...eet you. Bye until then, With Luv always, Joyce
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, at least, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49302325581 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23491155029 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3356416308 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.8421052632 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3157894737 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336941101329 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971670173139 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672336064592 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165256909316 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810817867431 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.