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Essay topics:

One of your friends invited you for a meal with his/her family in their home. You enjoyed the meal and had been happy to be introduced to his/her family.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

thank your friend and say that you enjoyed the meal
say what else you liked about this visit
ask your friend to meet you someday at a restaurant

Dear Mike,

Hello! Hope you are doing well. I am Inscribing this missive to thank you for inviting my family and me for a meal at your place last Sunday.

To begin with, I was overwhelmed when you introduce me to your family one by one. At that movement, I felt so special. Furthermore, the homemade pizza that you served us as a starter was so delicious. Moreover, how can I forget the “South Indian Thali” that your mother cooked especially for us was outstanding in taste. Additionally, the desert was also very cool and well decorated.

In addition, Your house is extremely spacious and located in the center of the city. Further, I liked your home interior, and also an orchid garden in your backyard is magnificent. Besides, I enjoyed your family videos from the past, principally when you were a little child.

I was wondering if you could join me to dine out at your favorite restaurant “Indian Summer” this weekend.

Hope you would come.

Warm wishes,

David

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86470588235 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67856414565 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9241552663 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6153846154 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3336791508 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106762097747 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089108029982 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178944096368 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734051279599 0.0580467560999 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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