People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection.
In your letter:
- describe the problems
- explain how they are affecting people
- say what the company should do to help
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter as a collective response for complaining about the poor internet speed being experienced by our society.
Residents of Beverly Hills are facing regular disruption in broadband internet supplied by your company. Moreover, speed is also rudimentary,as most of time, it is below the prescribed and offered standards. Additionally, fiber is ordinary and often experience breakdown whenever local maintenance activity of the society takes place.
While majority of the people do work from home, likewise, impacting their chores. Furthermore, we are also facing difficulty in paying our utility bills and other online tasks. Beside this, students have to complete certain assignments with help of internet which gets delayed due to non-availability of it.
I hereby, request to send you your engineers to inspect the complete line thoroughly and if found defective, should be replaced immediately in order to provide a hassle free service to the people.
I am hopeful our query will be addressed quickly.
Yours Sincerely
Navdeep
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...any. Moreover, speed is also rudimentary,as most of time, it is below the prescribe...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ermore, we are also facing difficulty in paying our utility bills and other onlin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59756097561 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99198314119 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.768292682927 0.622605031667 123% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9335389449 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164798994178 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539379907278 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454101154444 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648267726417 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420850087158 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 8.71597938144 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.