The proportion of income spent in Uk in 1998
The table describes the percentage of outlay spent on four popular things by both adults and children, divided by gender in England in 1998.
It is clear that with an exception of food, children in the Uk tended to spend a large amount of their allowance on electronic facility, music and videos. In contrast to children, the main items bought by adults was food .
According to the statistics in the table, food accounted for a quarter of adults’s expenditure ,specifically the outlay spent by women was threefold that of men, which was 39% and 14%, respectively. Regarding electronic equipment, the income spent by men was ten times as high as women. Notwithstanding music, both genders shares the identical percentage of their outlay ( 5% ). Videos was the least popular items which made up no more than 2%.
It can be seen from the table that children in Uk was most interested in music which accounted for 39% of the total while food was the lowest of their expenditure which was only 10%. In particularly, except for electronic equipment, girls spent 2% more than boys on music and also on food, which was 40% and 11%, consecutively. In term of electronic devices, girls spent only one third of boys which was 18%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, third, while, except for, in contrast, in particular, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82380952381 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77006499147 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6600471496 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.3 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132532773557 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572237356526 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518316469545 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861461389458 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325619703823 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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