On a recent holiday, you lost a valuabel item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item.
Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am one of your longest customer, writing to you in regards with the claim, for the loss of my valuable item during my recent holiday in Miami tour.
I had a diamond ring that comprises of platinum ring area with a 22 carot single stone diamond studed in centre. The total weigh of the ring is 5grams in which the diamond is about 1 gram. At this point you can roughly estimate the value of the ring at current market price. I had safely packed in a safe box and placed it in the middle of my hand suitcase.The ring was a gift I was waiting to present to my beloved on the 5th anniversary day.
I was stepped out of the cab, removed all items and entered inside the lobby of the Meridian hotel on 25th day of March 2020 around 13hours. As there was bit of a que situation to check-in key collection counter I sat on the lobby visitors gallery holding the suitcase on my lap. After around 30 minutes of wait I had my turn to receive the keys to my room where I clearly remember of holding the suitacase intact. When I reached the room I was anxious to see the ring, but unfortunately when I opened the suitcase I found the box that I had secured the ring was open. I was unable to see any ring inside.
I request you to help with the claim process. As I had bought the ring with the Insurance against lost prevention, I am hoping that I will be covered for the complete value of my precious item. It would be highly appreciated If you could take immediate action on this matter.
I will be waiting to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Norman.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...Miami tour. I had a diamond ring that comprises of platinum ring area with a 22 carot sing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ed it in the middle of my hand suitcase.The ring was a gift I was waiting to presen...
^^^
Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... anniversary day. I was stepped out of the cab, removed all items and entered i...
^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... 25th day of March 2020 around 13hours. As there was bit of a que situation to che...
^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...March 2020 around 13hours. As there was bit of a que situation to check-in key coll...
^^^
Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gallery holding the suitcase on my lap. After around 30 minutes of wait I had my turn...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24252491694 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35745079041 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9482266164 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148390666917 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516650550473 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059722484297 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107678514424 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816741765036 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.