As more and more students enter universities, academic qualifications are becoming devalued. To get ahead in many professions, more than one degree is now required and in future it is likely that people will take a number of degree courses before even starting work. This is an undesirable situation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As technology is evolving the system process of business is also evolving along side with lots of requirements therefore a need for more knowledge that is of various subjects is becoming a necessary these days. I disagree that degrees are turning into no value and also it is an undesirable situation, though there is time loss for the young generation to indulge more in academics before they could bag an actual job.
In one hand, it is a added stress to the young minds or fresher to obtain jobs. It also counts the extent of financial support that they become a burden to their parents or to themselves if they have to live financially independent. In China it has become a trend for a young generation to acquire degrees in 2 different subjects for the last 5 years as job requirements are as such.
On the other, having degrees in more than 2 subjects enables an individual to choose wide options in job search. For example in a mining industry the requirement of geophysicist along with reservoir engineering has become common. Also in a statistics institution you generally require knowledge in finance and strategy to be successful. A candidate with more than 2 degrees in different subjects will be able to have more control on work due to his / her knowledge capabilities.
To conclude, knowledge attained is never a waste or less value. Valuation of degree shouldn't be based on the availability of jobs or the monetary benefits it could bring. As we are advancing into high technology it is natural that we need to have more knowledge otherwise called as many degrees. Therefore, I disagree with the conception of qualifications becoming devalued and it is an undesirable situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92387543253 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96651146125 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9589825069 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226218106997 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763002905346 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587312235949 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138317827515 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525984733768 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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