As more and more students enter universities, academic qualifications are becoming devalued. To get ahead in many professions, more than one degree is now required and in future it is likely that people will take a number of degree courses before even starting work. This is an undesirable situation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With an increasing number of students opting for higher education, it is now no more seen as highly valued. It is often perceived that people would get multiple degrees before starting their professional life which is not desired. In my opinion, several professions do require people to take multiple courses before they start working, whereas in other occupations experience is more important.
There are numerous professions that enforce students to take multiple degrees before starting their career. These courses train them to get in-depth knowledge of most situations that they may encounter while working. This is desired to get rid of any difficult situation. For example, in the medical field, doctors do not start working after graduation, but they do specialization and in many cases even super specialization. This is because it helps them to gain expert level knowledge using which they can treat patients without putting their life at risk. Thus, it is the demand of the profession that encourages people to enroll in several courses.
However, in other professions such as construction or carpentry, skill and experience are more important than qualification. For example, the tradesman, having no degree, but good experience in producing stunning furniture is more valued in the market. Therefore, it is rather obvious that instead of getting multiple degrees, one should get practical knowledge and experience for better career prospects.
In conclusion, in some occupations such as medical getting multiple degrees is more important in order to perform better in later stages of a career, whereas in other professions, skills are more important than qualification.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45977011494 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9297044537 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1115836592 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271805818179 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911424286799 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617327291302 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174530137135 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644818296939 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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