You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books on time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about i

Essay topics:

You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books on time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to apprise you that the books which I have borrowed from the library will not be returned on time. I am really sorry about this delay but I cannot help it.

As you know I was supposed to submit the books on Monday but I will not be able to do so because I am in Delhi right now and I will return to Mumbai only on Tuesday. One of my uncles has fallen ill and is being treated in a hospital in Delhi. His condition is a little serious. Since his children are abroad, I have to be here by his bedside until they return.

I promise I will return the books on Tuesday. Since I have always returned my books on time, I hope you will waive the late submission fee.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours Sincerely

Rana Singh

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 635.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20529801325 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23854774453 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8200887435 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263805789887 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102637386424 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874510319802 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182912066167 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554446539688 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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