You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Ms. Flannigan,
I am writing to inform you about my inability to join the English course that I have enrolled last week, that is due to start on 24th December of next week. I am John Stansworth for your reference to look on the records of my registration.
I have received an amazing opportunity to work on a maintenance issue abroad last week due to some urgent requirement in my company's Asian centre at Thailand. I was waiting for such for the past 3 years to represent myself for the international centers and also experience the working culture in an Asian country. Therefore, I had to accept the call from my Manager for immediate travel to Thailand. Just after the call I realized I will overlap with the dates of language course that I had registered in your institution.
Though I will return on 23rd of December a day before the course, but it would be very late night as per my indicated flight landing times. I think I will not be in a position to wrap up myself to start a study that would be intensive. And also, I will have to report my company on the trip work which will take another 2 days.
It would be highly appreciable if you could help me to adjust my start dates, owing to my unforeseen last minute changes. I will be very comfortable and well prepared if I could start on 27th December that would be 3 days later from the actual dates.
I will be looking forward to hear positive from you.
Yours sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n my companys Asian centre at Thailand. I was waiting for such for the past 3 yea...
^
Line 10, column 27, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...al dates. I will be looking forward to hear positive from you. Yours sincere...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king forward to hear positive from you. Yours sincerely, John
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from you. Yours sincerely, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47940074906 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61731035848 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2999993006 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247473325791 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911478688389 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581391466023 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1341094758 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469951025601 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.