School teachers are more responsible for the social and intellectual development of students than parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
School is the place where we all have architected our minds and that is all because of our dedicated, passionate and loving teachers. The position now I am is all because of my great teachers. Though life is not completely based on schools for children as they all come from a home, the teachers and the parents equally play important role in the social and intellectual development of a student’s life. I have elucidated below.
In my life during by middle school I was more an average student struggling to score. I didn’t have anyone at home to help me with my homework as my parents were always busy with their world of job. I was lacking with the techniques to study, prepare for exams and assignment works. I also had a problem of shyness to go and ask for help at school or friends. It was my English and Math teachers who noticed my problems and helped me out. If not for them, I wouldn’t have become an Engineer. It was their support, tips and motivation my whole thought process changed.
Though my teachers had improved my capabilities, my parents had shaped my mind to meet out the complexity of life that is outside the home. My father being sales manager and my mother being a journalist they had lots to share with me so that I could decide my future and prepare myself to meet out challenges.
Though teachers do more in the social and intellectual development of a student, I see there is always a part for the parents to play.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more average'?
Suggestion: a more average
...n my life during by middle school I was more an average student struggling to score. I didn&apo...
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Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...prepare for exams and assignment works. I also had a problem of shyness to go and...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... always a part for the parents to play.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54924242424 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7260703368 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9145965444 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7857142857 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148057094329 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638763930821 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935062394435 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140888038329 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122474037434 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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