The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include:
· A brief introduction of yourself
· Your experience and relevant skills
· Why you want the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to express my interest for the position of librarian job especially during summer's. Firstly, I am a first year student majoring in computer science and I got to know about this wonderful opportunity when I saw it on the announcement board posted outside our library office department.
Secondly, I have worked as a part-time assistant in library department at my school mostly after school hours where I was in charge of managing student database which included issued and received date and was also responsible for putting the right books in appropriate sections of shelves. If someone would have crossed the due date, we always make sure to collect the fine from the person.
Thirdly, I would be grateful to have such a wonderful opportunity knocking at my door because it would not only provide me financial assistance but would also be quite useful for me by indulging in reading books and articles. On top of that, all the above activities will make the best utilization of my free time during my summer holidays.
I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Yours FaithFully
FaizalReza
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had crossed'?
Suggestion: had crossed
...opriate sections of shelves. If someone would have crossed the due date, we always make sure to co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94897959184 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72188976296 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683673469388 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.290791312 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 4.34317383033 256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128335461352 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559463622443 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520267916442 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623082318817 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439221702632 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.