Dear Sir,
I am intend to write this letter to apply for the vacancy in our library. I came to know through professor John Mendives that there is a vacancy for the post of Assistant librarian in our college library.
I am VJT, i am pursuing my masters degree through these college in library management and i am in the second last year of my studies. I have completed my bachelors degree also from these college. I have prior experience of managing library of six months in the berkeleys university.
This job will help in both the ways financially and professionally. By doing this job i would have more experience in managing library which will help in my career. I would be able to earn some money also to compensate my monthly expenses. Through this job i would also prepare for my next semester academic syllabus.
I look forward to receiving your revert. I am a bright student of your college and attaching my previous year academic records for reference purpose.
Yours sincerely,
VJT
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'intended'.
Suggestion: intended
Dear Sir, I am intend to write this letter to apply for the v...
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Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an in our college library. I am VJT, i am pursuing my masters degree through t...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this college' or 'these colleges'?
Suggestion: this college; these colleges
...i am pursuing my masters degree through these college in library management and i am in the s...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...these college in library management and i am in the second last year of my studie...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in the second last year of my studies. I have completed my bachelors degree also...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this college' or 'these colleges'?
Suggestion: this college; these colleges
...completed my bachelors degree also from these college. I have prior experience of managing li...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...chelors degree also from these college. I have prior experience of managing libra...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ths in the berkeleys university. This job will help in both the ways financial...
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Line 6, column 88, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y and professionally. By doing this job i would have more experience in managing ...
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Line 6, column 259, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e my monthly expenses. Through this job i would also prepare for my next semester...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82183908046 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72949785518 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.629363994 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186350038703 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741564984876 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047787586414 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988234974 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162944539638 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.