Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist To what extent do you agree

Art and science are valuable in our society . Both artist and scientist play a vital role in civilization in our society . The contribution of both are highly appreciated and valuable in the society But the scientist is more vital in the society . However in the world we live in today where technology is been invested and innovated scientist would be more value.

An artist is highly appreciated because of their artistry impact and contribution in the society . For instance lets take a look at Frida kahlo a Mexican artist with her remarkable painting and sculptures is be admire and inspire by the whole world. lets not forget about renowned artist like Micheal Jackson, the Beatles which are highly admired and a very big inspiration to all . Artist brings awareness to the society, and contribute and also raise funds for the society . By campaign raising awareness for disease like HIV/AID and any other harmful thing occurring in our society.

Furthermore scientist impact is more cumbersome they offer so much more to the society in the society . In terms of making life more easier and comfortable for the society.By inventing and innovating new ideas and technology that will help the society improved . Scientist bring out with solutions when ever there is a chaos in the society . Through scientist we are able to achieve longevity and excellent discoveries that enhance and reform the society at large. Scientist is behind every experiment and research to eradicate every possible threat in our society . Meanwhile form the huge machines to the lowest and tiniest equipment we used in our every day to day activities. To the foods are drugs use scientist effort is behind it .

So from the above discussion and vigilant allow me to favor the scientist than an artist with regards to their remarkable contribution to our society . scientist work as a source of invention and innovation to the society than artist which is just a source of inspiration and information to the society.

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Average: 9.4 (9 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 5.05154639175 436% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 937.175257732 178% => OK
No of words: 330.0 206.0 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04242424242 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76155930118 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 290.88556701 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7055701829 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 76.5299724578 121% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 102.0 2.54639175258 4006% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252058559661 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895415688075 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523574567742 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168103257652 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490316037075 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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