There are many different types of music in the world today. why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays ?

Essay topics:

There are many different types of music in the world today. why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays ?

Well, the music is another form of nature. There is no distinction as classical music, western music, folk’s music etc. The music is very essential for psychological aspects of life. We will discuss about the trend of which type of music is accepted by many of us.
Due to the globalization, anyone can move to any part of world and cross the territory of his of societal boundaries. There is such question about the type of music as classical, western or folk’s music. Any music is a creation of nature. But apparently folk music means traditional music is so closed to our tradition. It has been practice by our ancestors and we should remember them by virtue of this traditional music. As music is very for our life which bring lively ness in our life. Music also termed as one kind of therapy for psychological illness by the doctors. Music is brings notable changes in our life in terms of balanced thinking, calmness, it control anger, jealousy, and most important in this competitive world sportsmanship, balanced mind and courage as well.
Because of the very type of the music, music lovers are exposed to international music due to globalization and digital revolution. It is been just obvious that new things always attracts us towards it. So the international music is heard every where nowadays. Western music is mostly heard in our country and the Indian classical music is most popular in western countries.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'apparently', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'kind of']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258992805755 0.220444632235 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.115107913669 0.167888034529 69% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115107913669 0.0606518309736 190% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0539568345324 0.0506257000042 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0575539568345 0.118615021944 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136690647482 0.107062808482 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0287769784173 0.041066498444 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82988170295 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0179856115108 0.0385302599488 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.068345323741 0.0714148451538 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0107913669065 0.0191574576366 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0107913669065 0.00930345855455 116% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1437.0 1141.60824742 126% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.134020619 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91358024691 5.53046319177 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78085437643 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325102880658 0.284621296913 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251028806584 0.211203875043 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16049382716 0.133321485273 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119341563786 0.0843313296314 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82988170295 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539094650206 0.622163163488 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.533280328 62.8969750728 82% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1875 16.4300151701 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9682979842 44.7399317507 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 90.9928171075 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 16.4300151701 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.613754768223 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 40.2903806584 37.5504026743 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.87301587302 1.13073093955 166% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.589855405462 0.331212695627 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0939180721779 0.0927372745006 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0476235700323 0.0736520305886 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519293261813 0.579516596996 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108582414627 0.180689518051 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.265916180857 0.122183219658 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101601054407 0.0765303033291 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.550604045568 0.211926503985 260% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0345066877653 0.0737400523855 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.494809168673 0.203819188451 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451062913332 0.067151250289 67% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 8.32989690722 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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