There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concern about the recent challenges with Espanol bus services over these past few weeks. My name is Lilian, and I am a frequent customer of your bus services as I live in Chicago and commute to my office in New York with your bus. Nonetheless, I must commend you for your efforts in training the drivers in light of the fact that they drive safely and obey all the traffic rules as expected.
Unexpectedly, for the first time last week, the bus did not come through at the Chicago bus station and numerous passengers were left stranded after waiting for several hours. Albeit, we assumed that there was probably a maintenance problem with the bus, hence, we had to order taxis and Uber to take us to work while somepeople returned home. This happened the next day, and has somehow become the norm these days. Sadly, some of the passengers do not bother to wait for the bus anymore and are now using alternative buses and modes of transport, not to mention that I can hardly keep up with the high charges of other modes of transport. What is worse still, is that they do not have arrival stations that are located close to my office.
Therefore, I would be very thankful if you could look deeply into the reasons why the bus has suddenly become unreliable and rectify the problems. We would also appreciate that the an alternative bus is sent pending when the issues are resolved.
I look forward to your positive reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Lilian
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ehow become the norm these days. Sadly, some of the passengers do not bother to wait for th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...problems. We would also appreciate that the an alternative bus is sent pending when th...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our positive reply. Yours Faithfully, Lilian
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64552238806 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40484712782 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.039172807 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280196607416 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850926770104 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476968887788 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132464059818 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066606390686 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ehow become the norm these days. Sadly, some of the passengers do not bother to wait for th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...problems. We would also appreciate that the an alternative bus is sent pending when th...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our positive reply. Yours Faithfully, Lilian
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64552238806 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40484712782 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.039172807 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280196607416 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850926770104 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476968887788 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132464059818 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066606390686 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.