While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter explain
- what happened
- apologize for the accident
- tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl.
Dear Tim,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. First of all, I want to thank you for letting me stay in your apartment until you are away on holiday and I am writing to apologize for an incident which took place in your absence. While washing the dishes, I mistakenly broke the ceramic bowl gifted by your grandmother.
I am totally disappointed about this accident as I have the responsibility to take care about everything in the apartment until you come back. Actually, yesterday I decided to cleaned-up everything in the house, and when I was washing the dinner set and this bowl in the kitchen sink, the bowl suddenly slipped from my hand and broken into two pieces. I am extremely sorry for this as it was an expensive birthday present and very close to your heart. All this happened just unexpectedly and was not my negligence.
I want to tell you that I found a similar bowl on a website selling antique mugs and ordered it for you. Meanwhile, I also send this bowl for repairing to one of my friends, who is expert in bone china products. I am sure that he will be able to fix in next four days.
I hope you won't mind about anything and do send me some photos of your vacation on my email about how well you are enjoying your vacation.
Best Regards,
John
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44725738397 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51428647729 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5094568202 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349699926061 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113878263605 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952701889432 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219220362102 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112588354024 0.0580467560999 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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