Who have returned home after living with the family in English speaking country for six months. Write to the family describing the things you left behind. Ask them to send some or all of them to you over to cover the cost

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope this letter finds you hale and healthy. I am writing to inform that I have left few of my possessions in your home while I was staying with you. First of all, thank you for letting me to live with your family for six months. Those months had been a best period of my life since I learnt to live independently as well as comfortably with your family members.

Unfortunately, as I had to come back to my home for personal commitments, I left hastily. Hence I left few things at your home such as my mobile charger, lens used for my DSLR Camera, couple of clothes and my college identity card. As far as I remember, these items would be inside the cupboard in the room 405 where I stayed. Please confirm whether you can find these items in the mentioned room.

Also, I would request you to send me through courier service at the earliest. The cost of the services can be adjusted in the advance payment made during the time of my admission at the homestay. I am looking forward for a positive response.

Yours sincerely,
Chitra

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...y for six months. Those months had been a best period of my life since I learnt t...
^
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...r personal commitments, I left hastily. Hence I left few things at your home such as ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, so, well, while, such as, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49740932642 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52292769724 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8357655614 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233404876678 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813554262032 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832725906294 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153469922619 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097948315244 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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