Dear Mr. Ray,
I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to thank you for lending me your book titled, ‘How to read a weather report’ whose content was really helpful.
Earlier this month our manager, Mr. Kim had requested me to prepare a few slides for our latest product, the weather prediction model. Thus, my presentation contained details on how the weather affects our marine business, the unique ways we interpret them, and an introduction to our product.
As this demonstration was held in the priority meeting room, we were accompanied by potential stakeholders, who were planning on investing in our latest product. So, this presentation was among the highly regarded ones.
I am really grateful for having have got your book as it helped me with the second section of my presentation; the unique ways we interpret weather. The book contained various approaches and techniques on the methods adopted for weather analysis which I had planned to elaborate on through the presentation. Mr. Kim was quite impressed with them in particular.
Anyway, I shall return the book when you resume back to work, until then I shall continue reading.
Thank you once again!
Yours sincerely,
Adlen DSouza
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, really, second, so, then, thus, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12871287129 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77535190176 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7392980635 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1818181818 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24007914179 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089242220206 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608050024476 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135920123701 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801480358198 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.