write a letter to a company for help to renovate the school building
Dear Mr. Bob,
I am writing to inquire about the renovation job of the old school building in the city.
As your company has name in renovating job, I would like to take your assistance in getting the school renovated. Admittedly, this work demands creative ideas and experience to brighten up the ruined structure into a fabulous modern school. The old school building is in city-center and has been in dilapidated condition due to ruins of time. Historically, it is 100 years old and was built at the time of monarchy to teach the royal families. Although the area are is huge, but it is not exactly the way it should be for modern schooling. It need a brush of innovative ideas that can make it to perfect primary school with all modern amenities, such as library, computer laboratory and playground.
I would suggest you to visit the place and discuss with the board of directors for refurbishment ideas. If you agree to take up this task, we can decide on cost and time needed to complete the assignment. Moreover, your job would facilitate the kids with education, giving you blessings from the overall community. So, I request you to think on this and let me know if we can talk on it.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7668161435 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68244659161 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4053462752 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7692307692 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184077102631 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567809821904 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741388182548 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121876010703 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118732575837 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.