Write a letter to the company which is looking for help to renovate school buildings.
Why do you want to help?
What could you do?
When could you start?
You should write at least 150 words.
I am writing this letter about the advertisement posted in the Times of India on 1st February 2020. I would like to offer my help in renovating school buildings.
In a small firm, I work as an architect. Mostly, in the evenings I am free and so I can use my time in doing some voluntary job.
I recently worked on a century-old house in the old city of Ahmedabad. I wish to use my experience in giving a modern touch to the worn-out school buildings.
Recently, I am working on a new project which is a bit time-consuming and keeps me occupied until the end of this week. Thus, I can join you next week. I will be able to help with interiors and managing account books.
I hope it will be a great experience to work with you and do some good for our city. I have attached my résumé with this letter.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Tasneem
Comments
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am from V.K Enterprises and writing to you in response to the advertisement given by your company in the newspaper for the refurbishment of school buildings.
I am interested to take up this work assignment, so I would like to visit your site this Saturday and discuss the requirements with you. If things go well, my team will be ready to start the work from next Monday i.e. 03rd Feb.
My team has a wide experience in the renovation of buildings in the past.Our company’s catalogues with the images of our recent work can be referred to get the insights of our previous work. Recently, we have finished similar work assignment for St.Josephs school in Model Town, and the school management had greatly appreciated our innovative designs and our commitment towards work.
Also, I would like to tell you that my team comprises of dedicated young professionals, who apply themselves in the work, and ready to go extra mile to give our clients world class experience. I am hoping that you will give us a chance to serve you.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Neha
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se my time in doing some voluntary job. I recently worked on a century-old house...
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...with you and do some good for our city. I have attached my résumé with this lette...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Tasneem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.475 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69773487161 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63125 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0039445139 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204277721839 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728858490152 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750861924443 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912980466614 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498330741742 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.