Mr. Zepeda,
I am writing to demonstrate my discontent about the recent actions ocurred in our neighborhood. Every family in our location could observe the terrible behavior of some teenagers last weekend. To be more specif, I would like to share you some injuries that those youths caused in our place. They let their dogs in complete liberty on the street. As a result, they produced lots of injuries in trees, ground and other features in the park.
First of all, it is fundamental that we need to fix some policies about how families could use the accomodations in our neightborhood. In addition, I could help writing some of the rules in a paper in order to improve our peace and quite in the area.
I hope you could understand my disaproval with the recent facts, and it is important to take actions immediatly in order to avoid future risks.
Do not hesitate to call me for a meeting. As soon as possible, we need to solve this problematic.
Sincerely yours,
Daniel Grajeda
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hood. In addition, I could help writing some of the rules in a paper in order to improve ou...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78034682081 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7134649764 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5274309106 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130342413593 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452947615474 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511866331662 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600567688025 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628538952164 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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