Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the catastrophic event, which is happening daily, due to some adult people who are not concern about their dogs. As a matter of fact, they let dogs to go every where freely without taking care of them.
Actually, two last days, my children and I went to the park, which is located at the heart of the city and is so popular among people. In other words, every body goes there in order to take a peaceful rest. In spite of our expectation, some dogs were attacking to number of babies who were playing there. So, my children were scared a lot as well. Hence, we decided to come back home.
I am going to ask you for imposing some strict rules for people who are so inconsiderate. I would be thankful if you could do something urgent.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
FATEMEH BAGHERI.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...s a matter of fact, they let dogs to go every where freely without taking care of them. ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ul if you could do something urgent. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you. Yours faithfully, FATEMEH BAGHERI.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, look, so, well, as a matter of fact, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53125 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37926426391 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2332610665 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9090909091 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163721399697 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428547559622 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744790934355 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880113929811 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110091751092 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.