Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problemyou had while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include:what the problem waswhy this problem has upset youwhat you want to happen as a result of your letter

Essay topics:

Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem
you had while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include:
what the problem was
why this problem has upset you
what you want to happen as a result of your letter

Dear Manager,

The letter is with respect to the inconvenience I encountered with your store keeper , Mr Shawn post shopping . To begin with , please note that my association with M/s XXXX retail chain has been for over five years now. I placed an order, agreed on the pricing and discount , then requested your employees to supply the items at home. They did not express any issues. Feeling assured, I waited for the promised receipt. All the other errands, chores and commitments were put on hold for the arrival of your boys . About two hours later, I received nothing and hence called.

Feeling disappointed , I dropped in to enquire, to be told due to insufficient resources, you were not able to offer support services in full swing. I let it go and wanted to know when the commodities will be conveyed, with only silence as the answer.Please understand some essential products are wrangled in this incomplete order.

Can the pending work can be completed within a defined time frame, say by tomorrow ?

Appreciate an early revert

Sincerely
Sabitha

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nce I encountered with your store keeper , Mr Shawn post shopping . To begin with ...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ur store keeper , Mr Shawn post shopping . To begin with , please note that my ass...
^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., Mr Shawn post shopping . To begin with , please note that my association with M/...
^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rder, agreed on the pricing and discount , then requested your employees to suppl...
^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, agreed on the pricing and discount , then requested your employees to supply ...
^^
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...put on hold for the arrival of your boys . About two hours later, I received nothi...
^^
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd hence called. Feeling disappointed , I dropped in to enquire, to be told du...
^^
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed , I dropped in to enquire, to be told due to insufficient resources, you were ...
^^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...nveyed, with only silence as the answer.Please understand some essential products are ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... frame, say by tomorrow ? Appreciate an early revert Sincerely Sabitha
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, then, to begin with, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0790960452 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73636312074 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.779661016949 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3913847646 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7272727273 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833271178568 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240767145965 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338518074451 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.03100524169 0.12726935374 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346992612936 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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