Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details.
- why do you want to collect money for the charity organization?
- Ask your friend to help
- explain in detail how your friend can help.
Unfairness in free trade
trade barriers might create opportunities for corruption, but so do free trade agreements. Economists may envision a society where trade barriers vanish entirely, but free trade agreements are negotiated and signed by politicians with their own interests to worry about. As a result, the agreements now are usually full of loopholes in documents and complicated rules. For example, north American free trade agreement (NAFTA) proponents said the free trade agreement would deregulate commerce in north America, in many cases it just replaced existing regulations with new ones that favored the biggest corporations.
4. environmental destruction
free trade can cause immense environmental damage not only by allowing companies to shift their manufacturing facilities to nations with few or no environmental regulations but also by increasing access to natural resources in those nations. For example, a coal mining company in the United States might have to pay workers a high minimum wage, adopt aggressive safety policies and protect local rivers from pollution. free trade agreements might allow the mining company to move operations to a country without any of those rules, allowing it to cut costs by imperiling workers and the environment.
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Test big is the writing task…
Test big is the writing task that has been assigned in the genera mode of the writing the IELTS essay with regard to the multiple faults. The collection has the trade of tree combination in the link of best resume writing service with the proper collection of the charity matters and some other functional art of gratitude.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: trade
Unfairness in free trade trade barriers might create opportunities for...
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Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Environmental
...t favored the biggest corporations. 4. environmental destruction free trade can cause immen...
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Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Free
...nd protect local rivers from pollution. free trade agreements might allow the mining...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57731958763 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02757722086 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654639175258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1239254353 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.571428571 76.5299724578 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 16.8248392259 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0368819503392 0.216113520407 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190267587717 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229536611372 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0153780864888 0.12726935374 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170800721765 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 8.37731958763 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 70.7449484536 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 8.71597938144 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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