Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation In your letter tell him her about your flat give him her some instructions about his her stay tell him her what to do incase of problems

Dear Sabu,

I regret to you to inform that I would like to travel to United states tomorrow morning because of unavoidable circumstances occurred suddenly and I gave my apartments key to watchmen.
I apologize you to that I informed you I will be here for two months as we planned a get together with our college friends for one week from next Friday. Also, I understand that you already booked the flight and applied for the short vacation from your office. Although, kindly try to keep the noise and music level as much as less while hanging out with our friends because the peoples live near should not feel discomfort. In order to feel free to stay there please contact to watchmen for whatever assistance required for happy staying in my apartments. And, kindly keep the keys with you while you leave that place because I should visit you while I return from US and please do not feel bad because of my unavailability due to the pressure from my employer.

Sincerely,

Job

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e from my employer. Sincerely, Job
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68965517241 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54594457829 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.336811027 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0950200705736 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432160532983 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028076969902 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622993417987 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341430114339 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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