Write a letter to the government about the lack of sports facilities in your hometown for people of your age.
In your letter, you should tell:
what facilities you want
why you want them
what suggestions you can give
Hello Sir or Madam,
Greeting of the day, This letter is regarding lack of sports facilities in Ludhiana for people age between 18-30.
Ludhiana is a big city of Punjab and citizens of this city have interest towards basketball, cricket, Kabaddi and wrestling. But due to shortages of professional sports facilities they left stranded and lose hope to continue with their passion. We want a stadium with basketball and cricket ground so that people can be trained by professionals.
Currently, plethora of people in our city move to other cities to gain professional sports skills and most of them left disheartened because they can not afford living expenses of big cities.
I would like to suggest officials that they can use waste land of outskirts to build sport facilities for citizens. In that way people of Ludhiana city can have more healthier life and waste land will be utilised in an efficient way.
I hope you will consider my request and suggestions.
Thanking you
Abhinav Bindra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...isheartened because they can not afford living expenses of big cities. I would like...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...at way people of Ludhiana city can have more healthier life and waste land will be utilised in...
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Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...er life and waste land will be utilised in an efficient way. I hope you will consider my request...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10240963855 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73807606382 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4333319441 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208414489326 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865743982885 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529697889376 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105035996741 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459853770981 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.