write a letter to the insurance company for lost product

Essay topics:

write a letter to the insurance company for lost product

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you to intimate about loss of my laptop which lost during my recent holiday in Kerala. The laptop is covered under insurance policy no ABCD1234 which I took from your company before my trip. Let me explain the incident in detail.
The laptop, I purchased online on 23rd March last year for INR 46500.00. It was equipped with all latest features and had awesome design. It contained my personal as well as professional data, but fortunately I have back-up.
During my internal journey in Kerala, I booked a sit in local bus to travel from A to B. It was a night journey and I slept as soon as I reached to my sit as I was tired and exhausted. When I awaked in morning at my destination I found my laptop bag lost. I conducted due inquiry with bus staff but there was no help.
As, the mentioned policy covers full cost of valuable lost, I would like your company to reimburse the full cost. I would also request to complete the claim process earliest because I have to purchase a new one to continue my work.
A prompt action is appreciated.
Yours faithfully
D M Acharya

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...my internal journey in Kerala, I booked a sit in local bus to travel from A to B. It ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to my sit as I was tired and exhausted. When I awaked in morning at my destination I...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48275862069 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57734818697 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3467134759 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113680455109 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029975034349 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042190963817 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537122216545 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476390628295 0.0580467560999 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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