Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age in your area.
Mention about the current sports facilities available.
What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced?
How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in connection with the sports facilities in our area. I am Sejal, and I am an accountant. I live in Motavarachha area which is known as a developing area in our city.
Let me discuss in brief, we have a playground in our area, but with inadequate sports facilities in it. Currently, there are only a few things available in the name of sports instruments such as running track, cricket playground with well-furnished pitch. However, sports is not limited to only these games. In modern time, there are many other games well known all over the world like badminton, tennis, football, volleyball, and basketball which need to be developed with its all required facilities.
The person like me find difficulties to play these games like this at this playground as it has not enough space as well as the sports instruments to practice. I would suggest that if the facilities in the playground for all the above-mentioned games will be available, then It would be very helpful to the people of my age and profession. Sports is very helpful to be fit and healthy for the people of our areas as it burns calories results in disease-free life.
I would be very grateful if you would think and act on this matter to enhance the various sports facilities in our area.
Yours Faithfully,
Sejal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ea. I am Sejal, and I am an accountant. I live in Motavarachha area which is know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, in brief, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79220779221 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86912089766 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549783549784 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4007386549 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289232233988 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111962166156 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778430022371 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180955733404 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00927446716574 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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