Write a letter to the local council about the poor condition of roads in your area Include the following in your letter Explain the situation and roads condition How does it affect you and other people Suggest what measures need to be taken in your opinio

Dear Sir,
Please be advised that I am Ruslan Mirzazada, who lives in the area that you represent as a local council and I have some crucial notes about our road conditions that you must be informed.

First of all, the quality of the materials that used to building our roads are very poor, so that each year in winter, after some heavy snow and cold or freezing weathers, the surface of roads became destroyed. It affects the traffic and most of the cars or buses get damaged due to bad road condition.

Meanwhile, as you know, the Vahabzada street is still under construction. It creates more traffic in the Samad Vurghun street because of the overload. Every morning and evening, people suffer from this bad situation when they go to work and vice versa.

As aforementioned, this problem is turning our ordinary life conditions to terrible surviving process. That’s why, as an engineer, I would like to recommend you to pay more budget for solving this problem from our local council committee. This year our roads can be reconstructed more effectively and Vahabzada street can be opened to the public again to decrease the road load of the S.Vurghun street.

Please contact me for the details via this email or +994555555555 number.

I would be honored to assist you in this issue.

I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Thank you in advance.

Your sincerely,

Ruslan M.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 388, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Vurghun
...gain to decrease the road load of the S.Vurghun street. Please contact me for the de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, still, while, you know, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89256198347 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60324019332 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607438016529 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0568996346 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213801962971 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655965829101 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535617500357 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760502927455 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616887302583 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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