Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain what experience and special skills you have
- tell him/her when you think you could start
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in search of a part-time football coach at your well-known football club,-UMCA.
I am a student. Currently, I am pursuing a Bachelor degree in sports management from LUMS school of sports. Besides, I am serving as a football team coach for a university sports association, where my responsibilities include, to train new players, to give them knowledge about fitness and health, to improve team efficiency, to enhance the reputation of the university club. Furthermore, I have served as a mentor at Jinnah stadium. Moreover, I have done training courses in team management, problem-solving, leadership skills.
I believe my experience makes me a suitable candidate for a mentor. I can start, by the next week and I am available between the hours of 4 pm to 8 pm, as I have to attend classes in the morning. please, find my Cv attached for your perusal. If you have any further questions, please, do not hesitate to contact me.
I look forward to discussing this opportunity further at interview.
Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06285714286 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25376265707 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.375308694 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15463243958 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504188637053 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493040672593 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929537107432 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613898750874 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.