WRITE A LETTER TO THE MANAGER OF YOUR COMPANY THAT YOU WOULD LIKE TO TAKE A TRAINING COURSE. MENTION THE FOLLOWING:
-WHAT KIND OF TRAINING IT IS.
-HOW IT WILL BENEFIT YOUR JOB
-HOW YOU ARE GOING TO ARRANGE IT WITH YOUR WORK SCHEDULE
Dear Sir,
I am Jonny, working as Senior Executive in your team from past 6 months. I would like to request permission from you for attending the vocational computer training programme held by Human Resources department, which is scheduled for next term. I regret to say that I missed previous trainings because of my health problems. However, this time I am very excited to take this opportunity for betterment of my career. As you know, our every day work is intermingled with knowledge of computer and related technology for instance drafting to digital presentation minimum computer skills is must.
Especially in my work arena where everything work around software and data analytics computer knowledge is utmost important.After consulting HR manager to know details and timings of training I opted 3 morning sessions i.e 10 to 11 am from Monday to Wednesday and 2 evening modules from 5.30 to 6.30PM. I promise that these training times will not disturb my regular official activities as I am going to compensate these timings by working an extra hour everyday. I hope my decision will get your accord and support.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am Jonny, working as Senior Executive...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ment, which is scheduled for next term. I regret to say that I missed previous tr...
^
Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
... computer knowledge is utmost important.After consulting HR manager to know details a...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom 5.30 to 6.30PM. I promise that these training times will not disturb my regu...
^^
Line 9, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o 6.30PM. I promise that these training times will not disturb my regular offici...
^^
Line 9, column 457, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... these timings by working an extra hour everyday. I hope my decision will get your acco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, for instance, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09677419355 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88949861047 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682795698925 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3233653988 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194706959608 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816378769206 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343004406983 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150568449993 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164733154583 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.