Dear sir,
To introduce myself, I am Ujwal Maharjan, technical head at an airlines company named "Himalaya Airlines" located in Nepal. On behalf of my company, I would be attending the seminar on "Aviation security" going to be at Bangkok, Thailand. However, I need some more information regarding the seminar.
First of all, I need the date of seminar to be held since the website has inadequate details. Moreover, I would also like to get breakdown of the program at the event.
Second of all, after I land at Bangkok, since I am pretty unaware of the whereabouts there, I seek the name of hotel where I would be staying overnight. Furthermore, would they provide airport shuttle to pick me up? What would be the room, facilities and charges?
Thus, I hope you would take my letter in consideration and reply back sooner.
Thank you.
Faithfully yours,
Ujwal
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, second, so, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07432432432 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06446294853 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2502276223 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084710715445 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368034177238 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511221707196 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507806443505 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207678356175 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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