Write a letter to the planning manager to inform him that you are unhappy with the council's decision to pull down the historic building in your area due to lack of fund
- why it is important
- how it is useful in future
- suggest how to pay for repairs.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to convey my regrets about the decision made in the city's council to demolish one of our historic building The Governor's Residence in London. The building was built by the first prime minister of England, and another speciality about the building is it was constructed using the designs of Leonardo di Caprio the famous architect from Italy. Moreover, it is also a well-known tourist spot in the city.
The building serves the community in a variety of ways. Firstly, it helps civil engineering students from our local colleges to learn more about medieval constructions. Secondly, various town hall meetings are organised in that building. Finally, it boosts the neighbourhood business, since it attracts visitors from across the continent.
To overcome the problem of lack of funds, we can run fund raising campaigns in nearby provinces, seeking help from public. Additionally, we are eligible to apply for monuments preservation aid in the European Union since the building is more than 500 years old.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Peralta.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24725274725 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80315109835 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697802197802 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9298576022 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8181818182 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119312185003 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364660454066 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352191562052 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059072242538 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374923649383 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.