Write a letter to restaurant manager. In your letter,
• Explain that you would like to apply for the job
• Give some details of any relevant experience that you have
• Specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the advertisement that has been published in today’s newspaper for the opening in your restaurant. I have always been interested in the hospitality industry and what’s more interesting is that one get to meet and talk to new people every day.
Furthermore, I have done my master’s in Tour and Tourism and have a valid skill set of around 5 years in the same field. To elucidate, I have an in-depth knowledge of my field as I have a rich experience in managing a restaurant single-handed. my responsibilities include taking care of the day-to-day activities such as handling petty cash, taking care of all the customers etc.
Moreover, I would like to highlight a fact that I will only be available on weekends from 10AM to 6PM only as it is a good opportunity to earn some extra bucks. However, I am attaching my curriculum-vitae with the letter but do let me know if you want any extra piece of information from me side.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks in advance for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...in managing a restaurant single-handed. my responsibilities include taking care of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79274611399 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21588482679 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4059520295 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238013920074 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811313922428 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344269826729 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126809831372 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381120532506 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.