Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
I am writing to ask for repairing of my Sony A567 monitor which I bought 2 months ago. A big black spot was found in the middle of the screen. I really need this monitor for me as a freelancer who works at home. I would like my monitor to be fixed as soon as possible.
As a freelance graphic designer, I have bought this monitor for design works at home. It works perfectly until 2 days ago. A big black spot was found in the middle of the screen. It is a disaster for a designer as it prevents me from aliening straight lines. I have a few projects in hand and the deadlines are approaching. A defective monitor stops me giving my works to clients on time.
As I have a warranty, I would be grateful if you could send staff to my home and check the problem. It would be great if the defect can be fixed. However, if the problem persists, it will be fantastic to have a new one. I will be available on this Friday night, please get back to me if you can make it.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John Smith
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... staff to my home and check the problem. It would be great if the defect can be f...
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... it will be fantastic to have a new one. I will be available on this Friday night...
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...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16256157635 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4377916283 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3056151891 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804486850762 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286267521997 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318889472076 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419812449202 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238517849991 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.