write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated;you should write abouta) emphasis on emergencyb) explain the content of letterc) Why do you need it ? and where you would use it ?

Essay topics:

write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated;
you should write about
a) emphasis on emergency
b) explain the content of letter
c) Why do you need it ? and where you would use it ?

Dear Johan,

I Bhavesh bhanderi, residing at Dahisar-East sending you my birth certificate along with this letter to be translated from Gujarati language to English.

I would like to inform you that, I am going to apply for permanent residency visa of canada for which providing a birth certificate is one of the mandatory requirement, and i have 15 days time period with me to submit all documents. So it's a quite urgent task for us. My birth certificate comprises the basic details such as name of my parents, birth place, birth date and time & name of hospital.

Kindly I request you to provide the translated report as soon as possible in triplicate to the address mentioned herewith.

Your's Faithfully,
Bhavesh

Votes
Average: 8.5 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...iod with me to submit all documents. So its a quite urgent task for us. My birth ce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 608.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 121.0 206.0 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02479338843 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87544909034 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702479338843 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9413341241 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124499174048 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572519858519 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621821357258 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108403221953 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468266840825 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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